Talk:French cruiser Kléber/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 01:28, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

1. Prose ✓ Pass

2. Verifiability ✓ Pass

3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass

4. Neutral ✓ Pass

5. Stable ✓ Pass

6. Illustrations ✓ Pass

7. Miscellaneous ✓ Pass

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"and had a maximum draft (ship) of 7.46 meters" - I think a piped link will be better here, the (ship) qualifier doesn't need to appear in the text
"The nickel steel waterline armor belt" - MOS:SEAOFBLUE, three links in a row
"The sides of the elliptical conning tower were 100 to 120 millimeters thick." - Infobox gives 110 to 120, is there a reason why the ranges are different?
"During a visit to the United States, The ship" - lowercase for The.
"During a visit to the United States, The ship" - See MOS:OVERLINK, I don't think the United States needs linked here.
"After the Kingdom of Bulgaria joined the Central Powers " - Link Central Powers

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"Kléber had three-cylinder engines that used 20 Niclausse boilers at a working pressure 18 kg/cm2 (1,765 kPa; 256 psi)." - The infobox states "24 Belleville boilers"
"Kléber collided with the Royal Australian Navy troopship HMT Boorara in the Aegean Sea on 17 July 1915, forcing Boorara to beach herself on Mudros and damaging the cruiser's bow" - Source just says July 1915, unless I missed where the 27 is given.

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Just a little tightening up necessary. Placing on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 18:36, 6 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]