Talk:French cruiser Gloire (1900)/GA1
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 06:11, 28 June 2020 (UTC)
I will look at this one as well. Comments to follow in next few days. Zawed (talk) 06:11, 28 June 2020 (UTC)
Sorry, time got away from me a bit here. Comments as follows:
- Lead - what is meant by the battle fleet? Sounds like it is a specific formation.
- Lead - is there an appropriate link for Northern Squadron?
- No, I don't have enough info on its history to build an article on it yet.
- Lead - duty through into 1916 grammatically, I don't think "through" needs to be there.
- Agreed
- Design - the imperial conversion for draft doesn't quite match the infobox.
- Design - the thickness of the bulkhead armour isn't mentioned in the text.
- World War I - was sent in Dakar... sent to Dakar
- World War I - Gloire and all of her sisters were assigned to the 3rd DL. The previous sentence already refers to Gloire being in the 3rd DL so suggest rephrasing to state her sisters joined Gloire in the 3rd DL.
- References - place of publication for Roche?
That's it for me. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:27, 19 July 2020 (UTC)
- No worries, mate. See if my changes are satisfactory.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:28, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
- This looks all good to go, I am satisfied that it meets the GA criteria. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 09:58, 30 July 2020 (UTC)