Talk:French cruiser D'Estrées/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 03:11, 26 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

In great shape, as expected. A few comments:

Lead and infobox

suggest "D'Estrées was the lead ship of her class of protected cruisers" to avoid repeating D'Estrées
- Done
suggest "The ~~D'Estrées-~~class ~~cruisers~~ were ordered"
- Done
suggest "the Italian and German fleets, and ~~. The new cruisers~~ were"
- Done
the range doesn't match the body
- Fixed

Body

"one forward and one aft"
- Done
link Newfoundland
- Done
suggest "the unit consisted of D'Estrées, Tage and the protected cruiser Troude."
- How about "the unit consisted of three protected cruisers: D'Estrées'', Tage, and Troude?
perhaps clarify that the Division de Syrie operated in the eastern Med, as it is a bit of rude transition?
- Done
link Madagascar
- Done, and swapped the link for Djibouti for French Somaliland, the name of the colony at the time

That's all I could find. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 07:20, 26 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for another review! Parsecboy (talk) 10:09, 26 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

No worries, always a pleasure. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by acceptably licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 03:07, 27 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]