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Reviewer: MathewTownsend (talk · contribs) 19:12, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
- review
- "She spent most of the rest of the war blockading the Straits of Otranto and the Dardanelles to prevent German, Austro-Hungarian and Turkish warships bottled up." - don't understand. Is a word left out? To prevent them from being "bottled up" or what?
- Oops, fixed.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:48, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
- "This, combined with other poor traits, including the great weight in coal they had to carry, made them rather unsuccessful ships" - I've complained about the "rather unsuccessful ships" before. For some reason that's the only way to word it?
- Cut it down a bit, how does it read now?
- I also wonder about the Mediterranean Fleet, which in this article appear to be a French Mediterranean Fleet. Is this link right?
- Yes. Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:25, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
- otherwise, a-okay. will put on hold. MathewTownsend (talk) 20:11, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
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- no edit wars, etc:
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Another nice article. Congratulations! MathewTownsend (talk) 21:11, 15 July 2012 (UTC)