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Good articleFrench battleship Masséna has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starFrench battleship Masséna is part of the Battleships of France series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
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DateProcessResult
July 8, 2012Good article nomineeListed
August 25, 2020Good topic candidatePromoted
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A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on May 6, 2010.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the French battleship Masséna was sunk as a breakwater during the Gallipoli Campaign?
Current status: Good article

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Reviewer: MathewTownsend (talk · contribs) 19:44, 7 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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  • There shouldn't be a period in the caption of the image, as its not a complete sentence.
  • I linked flagship at first mention in the lede, hopefully that's ok.
  • That's all. Good work, and on hold.

MathewTownsend (talk) 20:06, 7 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

    • Good catch on the period - it was in the article when I rewrote it and I didn't notice it. Good call on linking flagship in the intro too. Is there anything else you'd like to see done with the article? Thanks for your review. Parsecboy (talk) 20:22, 7 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Dimensions and references

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Dimensions are a relatively common source of confusion with ships/boats. Some of the print references may be questionable.

  1. Masséna was 112.650m between perpendiculars - in this case from the furthest (submerged) extent of the bow to the axis of the rudder. (LBP)
  2. 116.785m on design waterline (LWL)
  3. 117.120m overall (LOA)

Dimensions are from primary source - drawings from Marine Nationale / Ateliers et Chantiers de la Loire. 206.47.94.227 (talk) 17:30, 13 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Conway's did give the correct figure of 112.65m for the length between perpendiculars - I just linked to the wrong article inadvertently. Thanks for catching my mistake. Parsecboy (talk) 17:40, 13 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Photo

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Here. Parsecboy (talk) 20:40, 26 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]