Talk:Freida Pinto/GA1
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Reviewer: GleekVampire (talk · contribs) 11:37, 24 April 2013 (UTC)
I will review this Good Article nomination. Nominators please be prepared to answer queries raised in the review. —GleekVampire | talk! 11:37, 24 April 2013 (UTC)
- External links
- Let's start with some problematic External links as per the tool. There are redirects and dead links, please correct them first. —GleekVampire | talk! 11:38, 24 April 2013 (UTC)
- Early life and modeling career
- When she was ten, Sushmita Sen won Miss Universe 1994, which turned out to be a defining point in Pinto's life --> Please elaborate. How did Sen's win at Miss Universe become a defining point in her life? Are they related? Does Pinto consider her a role model?
- She considered Sushmita Sen to be her role model and wanted to become like her. The fact is very well stated in the source. —Vensatry (Ping me) 06:39, 26 April 2013 (UTC)
- Acting career
- Very well written :) No major issues here.
- Unlike her previous films, Trishna gained positive response from critics --> Can't find a reference for this
- Media image and personal life
- Soon after the release of Slumdog Millionaire, Pinto garnered immense popularity was frequently included among the "Most Beautiful Women in the World" list --> Shouldn't there be a conjunction or something between popularity and was?
- The same year, Daily Telegraph reported that she was the highest paid Indian actress – she is not considered a Bollywood star as she never appeared in a Bollywood film --> Can you rephrase this sentence? It's a little confusing.
- Rephrased —Vensatry (Ping me) 06:39, 26 April 2013 (UTC)
Overall the article looks pretty good. —GleekVampire | talk! 13:45, 25 April 2013 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- B. MoS compliance:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail: