Talk:Freedom of Information and Protection of Privacy Act (British Columbia)

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The legislation:

defines public sector requirements for:
- collection
- use
- disclosure
- safeguarding

– of individuals' personal information

decrees individuals' right to access public sector records, including:
- access to an individual's own 'personal information'
- records in the custody or control of a 'public body'

— subject to specific exemptions

The problem in the compressed version is that you can't determine the scope of the final clause "subject to specific exemption".

It might be as shown above, or it might modify both bullets. — MaxEnt 01:11, 18 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Edit: Generally the root cause is cramming too much into one sentence. — MaxEnt 01:12, 18 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]