Talk:Fred Pepper/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 22:26, 19 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I shall be reviewing this against the GA criteria as part of a GAN sweep. I'll leave some comments soon. JAGUAR 22:26, 19 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
"the end of his playing career was marked by short spells at other emerging Northern teams" - unclear, what is 'short spells' referring to? And I assume this means the north of England?

"a small town prospering from the installment" - instalment (British English)

" home to Bethlehem Steel and it's eponymous football club" - its
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
No original research found.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

The issues I picked out were very minor, but the article meets the criteria based on its good prose, broadness and coverage. JAGUAR 14:30, 20 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]