Talk:Franklin Matthias/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 23:06, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:06, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

• No DABs and no problems with external links.
• add |adj=on to template for 400,000 acres (160,000 ha) to give it the hyphen it needs.
• The lede repeats much of the detailed info from the main body. I'd suggest that you cut out the detailed stats, forex on the epic scale of building at Hanford, and simply say that basically oversaw its construction from scratch and mention the three reactors. Similarly I'd suggest that you drop the details of his post-war career and just mention the companies and countries that he worked in.
• Do you have any info on his first wife? And when he married for the 2nd time?
• Images acceptably licensed.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:58, 18 February 2015 (UTC)

1. Good.
2. Done.
3. Done.
4. Reva Baumgarten? Yes, I have some information on her. Added at the start of the second paragraph of Early life. Added the date of his second marriage to the last paragraph.

Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:02, 18 February 2015 (UTC)