Talk:Frank Tarr/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 23:14, 14 July 2015 (UTC)

• No DABs, external links OK
• Images acceptably licensed.
• You're using a lot of UK-specific terms that are not immediately obvious to non-Commonwealth English speakers. So a lot of links are going to be needed.

• Added a ton! FunkyCanute (talk) 10:29, 15 July 2015 (UTC)

• Is there a link for international rugby union? It's And are there articles on the rugby positions like centre and three-quarters? If so, link them.

• Yes, for positions; also rugby union but not specifically 'international'. Done. FunkyCanute (talk) 10:29, 15 July 2015 (UTC)

• Move links to first usage (like Oxford).

• Done. FunkyCanute (talk) 10:29, 15 July 2015 (UTC)

• Link tries, caps, reading law, solicitor, Captain of Games, rugby XV, 'A' team, fresher, articled

• Fixed: changed XV to team; Captain of Games doesn't have an article; neither does A team; all others done. FunkyCanute (talk) 10:29, 15 July 2015 (UTC)

• So I guess that an 'A' team is not the highest level of competition? That would be the senior team, right?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:38, 15 July 2015 (UTC)

• Owston Dickinson Simpson and Bigg Don't know about law firm names, but normally there would be commas separating the individual names.

• Fixed. FunkyCanute (talk) 10:29, 15 July 2015 (UTC)

• Need place of publication for McCrery.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:14, 14 July 2015 (UTC)

• Fixed. FunkyCanute (talk) 10:29, 15 July 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the review, Sturmvogel 66. Please let me know if I need to fix anything else. FunkyCanute (talk) 10:29, 15 July 2015 (UTC)

• Only need a link for Lincolnshire regiment.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:38, 15 July 2015 (UTC)

• Done! FunkyCanute (talk) 17:11, 15 July 2015 (UTC)