Talk:Frank R. Cock

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Review: January 5, 2025. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

Passed. Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:41, 5 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

This review is transcluded from Talk:Frank R. Cock/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Roc0ast3r (talk · contribs) 23:33, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Kavyansh.Singh (talk · contribs) 12:07, 4 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I'll do it, – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 12:07, 4 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

"Frank received education through the public schools in Davenport, as well as at Davenport Business College." --> "Frank received his preliminary education through the public schools in Davenport, and later went to the Davenport Business College." If that helps.

Done. RONIN TALK 20:11, 4 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

"When the South Dakota state livestock sanitation department was created in 1909, he became a board member." --> "In 1909, he became a board member of the newly created South Dakota state livestock sanitation department." If that helps.

Done. RONIN TALK 20:11, 4 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

"He won the primary against T. G. Wall and A. L. Gurwell." -- The user hasn't yet been informed in text of his political affiliation, and thus is clueless about which party's primary election is this about.

Fixed. RONIN TALK 20:11, 4 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

"and Senate in March 1915. In 1920, Cock was elected to the branch's upper chamber, the Senate, " -- MOS:DUPLINK of senate.

Fixed. RONIN TALK 20:11, 4 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

"The bill initially received objection due to" -- from whom?

Fixed. RONIN TALK 20:11, 4 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

"After several discussions lasting multiple weeks, S. B. 68 was" -- "After several discussions lasting multiple weeks, the bill was"

Done. RONIN TALK 20:11, 4 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thats about it. The article meets 1b, 2a, 2b, 2c, 2d, 3a, 3b, 4, 5, 6a, and 6b. No spot checks have been performed. Putting on hold. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 12:19, 4 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Kavyansh.Singh: I believe I've addressed all of your comments now. RONIN TALK 20:11, 4 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- Well, then thats about it, thankyou! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:41, 5 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.