Talk:Francesco Guccini/GA1

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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 14:23, 1 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry, I have to quick-fail it. The prose is nowhere near "good"; frankly, it is not even "clear and concise" and grammar is beneath contempt. An example: "Record Producer CGD commissioned Guccini to write a song for the 1967 Sanremo Festival, "Una storia d'amore", to be sung by Caterina Caselli and Gigliola Cinquetti at . The song, though, was not selected for the event,[19] and Guccini was embittered by the edits made by two lyricists engaged by CGD.[20] Guccini made his debut as a singer-songwriter in March 1967, with the album Folk beat n. 1,[21] which received little commercial success.[22] Three of the songs recorded for the album had previously been successes for Nomadi and Equipe 84: "Noi non ci saremo", "L'antisociale" and "Auschwitz"."

Please consider taking it to WP:GOCE/REQ or alternatively ask someone who can perform a good copyedit. I also suggest requesting a peer review. And only then take it to GAN.