Talk:Four harmonious animals/GA1

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 08:16, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 08:16, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Great, Iazyges!--Farang Rak Tham (Talk) 08:39, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y (One is 47.6%, however this is on a review site, likely copied directly from Wikipedia. All others are much lower.) 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No Dead links Y
• Images appropriately licensed Y

Prose Suggestions

• national folktale of Bhutan, is also popular in Tibet and Mongolia, and is widely referred to in these cultures. suggest you change this to national folktale of Bhutan, and is popular in Tibet and Mongolia. All of these cultures widely reference the Four harmonious animals.

 Fixed.--Farang Rak Tham (Talk) 15:54, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

• Thus, communal harmony and respect for seniority are the main moral of the story. suggest removing "Thus".

 Done.--Farang Rak Tham (Talk) 15:54, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

• The German city of Bremen, which is featured in this version, adapted the motif of the four animals for the city's coat of arms. Is it known when they adopted the coat of arms?

Not mentioned in source. The Wiki article coat of arms of Bremen mentions a year, but does not contain any information about a "heraldic device" of four animals.--Farang Rak Tham (Talk) 15:54, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

• @Farang Rak Tham: That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:30, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
  • That was quick! Thanks for passing, and I'll apply your suggestions.--Farang Rak Tham (Talk) 15:43, 6 March 2018 (UTC)