Talk:Foster Furcolo/GA1

GA Review

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 18:07, 3 February 2017 (UTC)

I'll start this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:07, 3 February 2017 (UTC)

• No DABs, external links good.
• There's no way that source for the infobox photo is correct since he wasn't even born yet. Doubt that you can track its correct attribution since the problem seems to be on Flickr's end, though.
  • The inaccuracy on the part of the Internet Archive Flickr stream is because the image is taken from a series of publications that began in 1906. The photo is actually from a publication dated 1958. I have updated the image description to reflect this. Magic♪piano 19:39, 26 February 2017 (UTC)
• Images appropriately licensed.
• In addition to supporting community colleges, as governor he also furthered This reads awkwardly to me; not sure if "as governor" needs to be there, or if it's just bad punctuation. Rewrote Magic♪piano 19:39, 26 February 2017 (UTC)
• to his brother Charles he played comma after Charles Fixed Magic♪piano 19:39, 26 February 2017 (UTC)
• Link Longmeadow, district attorney, attorney general Done Magic♪piano 19:39, 26 February 2017 (UTC)
• Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:33, 24 February 2017 (UTC)

Thanks for taking the time to review this. I think I've addressed your issues. Magic♪piano 19:39, 26 February 2017 (UTC)