Talk:Forever (Mariah Carey song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 20:14, 12 December 2010 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]- "however, he will continue living in her memory, forever" - remove commas
- ""Forever" was a song Carey wrote alongside Walter Afanasieff in early 1995" → "Forever" was written by Carey and Walter Afanasieff in early 1995
Composition
[edit]- "The song is set in the time signature common time" - it isn't in common time according to [1]
"in the key of A ♭ major" - no space between 'A' and '♭'- Link chord progression
- The chord progression is A♭-C/G-Fm/E♭-D♭-E♭
Why don't you include the vocal range? (E♭3 to F♯5)- You need a source straight after the quote sentence
Reception
[edit]- ""Forever" was released as an airplay only single in the US, and received a limited European release." - source?
Music video and live performances
[edit]- ""Forever" was performed throughout all the shows on Carey's Daydream World Tour in 1996" - source?
References
[edit]- Pretty good, I did a bit of linking :)
Summary
[edit]Good job Nathan, ping me when you're done Adabow (talk · contribs) 20:14, 12 December 2010 (UTC)
- Nice work, passed. Adabow (talk · contribs) 21:45, 12 December 2010 (UTC)