Talk:Forest of the Dead/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: DoctorWhoFan91 (talk · contribs) 17:46, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk · contribs) 20:16, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I will be reviewing this! This is the first GA article that I have reviewed.

I will give a proper in depth review but first I think these issues should be addressed:

In "Release", the dates should be in the style of "7 June 2008", not "7th" etc, and please can you link the TV shows that are mentioned?
In "Release", remove "easily" from "easily out-ranked the football" as it does not sound neutral.
I think that "Release" should be in "Production", or at the very least it should be "Release and reception" (not capitalised "reception").
Is it possible to expand the "Production" section with more info/sources? That would really help the article.
Images: Can the current image in the prose be reduced, as it is quite big, and can there be other free images there (e.g. Steve Pemberton)?
In reception, "Similarly, Patrick Mulkern of Radio Times found Professor River Song interesting, someone the Doctor is yet to meet but someone who knows a lot about him, including his name." – The bold is a bit confusing, can this be quoted or clarified ?

Once these are addressed/replied to I will give it a proper line by line review :) Please do not hesitate to ping me with any questions etc. DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 20:16, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]