Talk:Forest Highway 16/GA1
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Reviewer: Titoxd (talk · contribs) 22:40, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- The prose is excellent for the most part, although some parts could still be tightened up a bit. Specific comments:
- The three counties in question do not participate in the system, and the roadway falls in the middle of the G zone for numbering purposes. — it would be ideal if you could mention the counties that Hwy 16 runs through before this sentence. Also, if you could explain what the G zone is (e.g. "The "G" Zone is west of US 41 between Lake Michigan and Lake Superior," from List of Michigan County-Designated Highways) that would also aid the lay reader in understanding where the route lies.
- FFH 16 crosses back into Houghton County one last time and immediately terminates at M-38 west of the community of Nisula.[2][3] — since there is no map, is M-38 just the terminus of Hwy 16, or does M-28 terminate there as well?
- The prose is excellent for the most part, although some parts could still be tightened up a bit. Specific comments:
- B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- No issues here.
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- The article really needs a map (and WP:USRD/STDS even demands one), but WP:WIAGA does not mandate this.
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- The only real complaint I have with the article is that there is no map, but I understand that map making isn't a trivial task, and thus won't put a hold on the article for that. Titoxd(?!? - cool stuff) 23:09, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Pass or Fail: