Talk:Ford Piquette Avenue Plant/GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:17, 9 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:17, 9 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

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1.a Y

1.b Y
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2.a Y

2.b Y

2.c Y

2.d Y (47.1% is highest, due to incidental parallels of some phrases.)
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3.a Y

3.b Y
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4.a Y
5
5.a Y
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6.a Y

6.b Y

No DAB links Y
No Dead links Y

Prose Suggestions

Please note that these are suggestions, not requirements.

Built in 1904, it was the second center of automobile production for the Ford Motor Company. suggest you change this to Built in 1904, it was the second center of automobile production for the Ford Motor Company, after [whatever the first center was].
Plans for the new car were announced on March 19, 1908. is the "new car" here the Model T? If so I suggest Plans for the new car, the Model T, were announced on March 19, 1908.
@Jackdude101: That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 13:16, 2 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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