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Reviewer: HĐ (talk · contribs) 15:52, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
Will be reviewing this soon. HĐ (talk) 15:52, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
from the former's
Usually we use "former" and "latter" when there are two subjects. Change it to "Pop Smoke's album"top 10 hit
"top-10 hit"- Introduce who CashMoneyAP, Lil Baby etc. are in first instance
keys and bass
is it keyboards and bass? Consider linking them- Link other music terms as well, i.e. beat, drums...
- Link the Bahamas
wasn't
"was not"
HĐ (talk) 04:00, 9 February 2021 (UTC)
- Probably link moan
arioso and vigor
is this in quotes?- Single-word quotations like
"sinister".
are not helpful. Remove them number 6
"number six" per MOS:NUMa million units
"one million"- The rest of the article is decent.
Putting this on hold for seven days. HĐ (talk) 06:22, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
- HĐ, I have addressed all of your concerns. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 07:54, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
- Passing. Well done! HĐ (talk) 13:34, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
- HĐ, I have addressed all of your concerns. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 07:54, 17 February 2021 (UTC)