Talk:For Washington/GA1
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 22:23, 19 September 2015 (UTC)
I'll have this to you soon JAGUAR 22:23, 19 September 2015 (UTC)
Initial comments
[edit]- The leads needs to be expanded slightly to summarise the article. There is nothing on what critics thought about the film in the lead
- "is a 1911 American silent short historical fiction drama film" - some overlinking here. "Short" can at least be de-linked
- " She hides her hatred of them and plies them with drink" - "piles them with drink" needs rephrasing
- " Washington Crossing the Delaware" needs to be italicised
- Please delete one of the images in the Release and reception section - there isn't enough room for two images
- I would recommend splitting plot and production into two sections
Close - promoted
[edit]I had to do a little bit of cleaning up, but this should be good to go. The references are adequate and the article is quite comprehensive given the era. Well done 
JAGUAR 22:36, 19 September 2015 (UTC)