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Hey I am grad student who participated in the WSPA project at the Indiana Statehouse this semester. I just wanted to mention a few things for your layout of your article. 1. If you are going to use a statement like "nearly 1000 students walk past it every day" you will need to cite some kind of metrics on walking paths and foot traffic in order to keep that sentence in the article. Otherwise I would just take the number out and rewrite the beginning to state merely the objects location and its design principles. 2. Try to focus the voice of the article on the Neutral Point of View or scholarly bystander as I like to call it. Follow the link to learn more. I wish you the best of luck with your article, can't wait to see how it turns out.CLAvalon (talk) 06:27, 12 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hi. I was just looking up your references (trying to find the reference for the 1,000 student quote above) and noticed that reference #2 just goes to UWM's main page and reference #3 goes to a blank Merchant's Circle page.Maybe part of the link is missing?Claudiamoon (talk) 23:01, 14 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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