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February 7, 2011	Good article nominee	Listed

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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that one design for a Flight deck cruiser was described as a cross between a Brooklyn-class light cruiser and the aircraft carrier USS Wasp?

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Reviewer: Thurgate (talk) 23:07, 1 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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It is reasonably well written.
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Comments

1. designed by the United States Navy during the period between. Suggest - A comma after Navy

I've tweaked it in a slightly different matter, adding "proposed" (since none were built) before "type of warship" and putting the comma there. Doe that work?

2. Several designs were proposed for an ship carrying both aircraft. Suggest - changing an to a

Done.

3. a secondary dual purpose armament of eight 5-inch (130 mm) guns also being carried. Suggest - a secondary dual purpose armament of eight 5-inch (130 mm) guns where also carried.

Reworded the whole sentence entirely to be a bit more clear on the roles (i.e. what "dual purpose" means) and comparing to conventional light cruisers of the time. Better?

4. rendered the flight-deck cruiser concept moot. Might just be me, but could you re-word moot.

I've rewritten that sentence entirely, and also added a bit at the end about the proposed Iowa-class conversions that added a flight deck.

I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate (talk) 22:39, 7 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! Let me know if anything else is needed. :) - The Bushranger _{One ping only} 23:19, 7 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Nice work. Passed Thurgate (talk) 23:34, 7 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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