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Reviewer: Djmaschek (talk · contribs) 20:47, 13 December 2014 (UTC)
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[edit]This is all for now. This is a long article. I'll reread it later. Djmaschek (talk) 20:47, 13 December 2014 (UTC)
- 2nd Introduction paragraph. "...where the attack were repulsed..." (was repulsed)
- 1st paragraph of Most northern flank. Missing citation.
- Done but I'll wait for Keith-264 to verify as I'm working off largely archived version of the article, for the time being, rather than the sources themselves.--Labattblueboy (talk) 19:34, 23 December 2014 (UTC)