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I didn't create this article - but I knew a bit about the company so I figured I'd add to it. If it's not Wiki-notable, then go ahead and remove it - I'm not married to it. It just looked like it could stand to be expanded :) --Inaxdaze 02:44, 12 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I edited a little bit (added the last 2 paragraphs) but no much.

vw

They have recently teamed yup with volkswagon (sp?) to include a guitar the plugs into the audio system and uses it as in a senses a bigass rolling amp.

If you can find information on this, as in a published news article that states this, it would be cool information. I do know about the system you're talking about, the commercial with the guy playing guitar, "It's got airbags!", but I know not of whom it was said to be involved in that. Thyme Cypher 17:44, 24 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Neutrality?

I question the neutrality of the current text of this page; it reads like something that the PR people at the company put together. 70.20.173.205 01:56, 5 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

You're absolutely correct; I've largely gutted this article and rewritten other parts. Hopefully it sounds better. Of note however was the removal of unsourced/dubious paragraphs on their "notable clientèle" and the recording studio they own. This article needs more sourcing regardless. —/Mendaliv/^2¢/_Δ's/ 18:32, 15 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Norma Jean

Why isn't Norma Jean's guitarist First Act signature guitar mentioned in this artical? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.29.194.30 (talk) 02:33, 5 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Why does an elephant have a guitarist? Or do you mean Nile Rodgers plays a First Act?
Weeb Dingle (talk) 06:06, 8 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Cleaned up.

I cleaned up the article a bit to include proper grammar and linkage. Thyme Cypher 17:47, 24 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

tear it down, start again

This stub (article?) is outdated as First Act has been somewhat dead for years, like 2014. There is a certain collector demand for some of their models (particularly those few made in the United States) as well as oddities like the Paul Westerberg signature or the "Volkswagen" or "Garage" model. The "Guitar Studio" was an interesting idea that quickly became a vanity project. Maybe I'll get around to outlining an actual history of the brand. Meanwhile, FFI: http://forum.frugalguitarist.com/yaf_postst2518_decline-and-fall--First-Act-guitars.aspx
Weeb Dingle (talk) 06:03, 8 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Criticism Section

Just because there is a source for the Criticism Section, that doesn't make it notable. CoolieCoolster (talk) 12:11, 17 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

This is notable. The fact that a company sued a competitor that told them their products were bad is a rather interesting form of corporate conduct. ViperSnake151 Talk 19:55, 17 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Leave this article alone

The massive 15 Aug cut by user CoolieColster is at best ill advised, and will largely be reverted (by me) along with overdue editing.

The company went through a rapid and ill-advised ramp-up — including some lines of highly regarded guitars built in its First Act Guitar Studio, and ties to Rick Nielsen, Paul Westerberg, Martin Gore, and Adam Levine — with multiple brand dilutions, until 2014 when it all but collapsed and was an easy target for acquisition. And THAT is the story around which a proper article may be built.

To refer to the major destruction of that history as a "De-Advertisement Edit" is ludicrous. Chopping 6,674 is a hairsbreadth short of de facto deletion. Most pointedly, First Act has been basically a toy brand since ~2015, so there's no basis whatsoever to pretend that even greatly detailed description of the DEFUNCT musical instrument lines is in any way "advertisement." There are certainly self-promo articles all through WP that are much more deserving of this degree of vigilante vandalism.

Props to ViperSnake151, but a section about one model of guitar is a far cry from enough to fill an encyclopedic article. For instance, I see you didn't mention the guitarist in the promotion's ads.
Weeb Dingle (talk) 07:00, 7 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I have added back a bunch of previously deleted information, removed a few pounds of promo-speak, and added detail. Supporting info is NOT as difficult to locate as I'd first thought. But until I get time to make the links (which right now could be weeks), anyone who feels the urge to start cutting stuff ought INSTEAD either fill in the gaps OR go away, 'kay?
Weeb Dingle (talk) 04:08, 14 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]