Talk:Final Resolution (January 2008)/GA1

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 00:29, 18 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 00:29, 18 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

And so another review by Wizardman on an article I wrote. "So...we meet again." I've done a copyedit of the article as soon as I saw this page was created. Hopefully it will help solve any issues you find. I found a bunch of stuff I missed when I nominated it.--WillC 08:13, 18 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Yup, tackling the top end of the sports backlog now that I finally have time to do so; since it's mainly your stuff I'll probably do antoher one or two.

I hope to be doing the same very shortly. The sports backlog is always extremely long. I hope to get involved in reviewing some to keep it shorter. Maybe under 20 or 15 articles at a time. I plan to nominate plenty this next coming year so I might as well do my part.--WillC 01:33, 19 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Here's what I found:

"TNA created a section regrading their event" regarding
- O_0 What the hell? How did I screw that up? Fixed--WillC 01:33, 19 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
"TNA held a second Final Resolution event in December 2008 due to unknown reasons.[5]" I'd reword to have it say that TNA moved Final Revolution to December rather than January, since it makes the unknown reasons part pop a lot more.
- Rewrote, that good enough?--WillC 01:33, 19 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
"However, before the encounter and it" rm and
- Fixed--WillC 01:33, 19 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
"which the later lost." latter
- Fixed--WillC 01:33, 19 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
"around the sametime," same time
- Fixed--WillC 01:33, 19 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
"While due to Team 3D's creativity in the Ultimate X match they "stole the show in a match they had no business being in."" Reword a bit; it feels like it's missing a piece as is and is a fragment.
- Worked on it, hope that fixes the issue.--WillC 01:33, 19 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when this is fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 17:25, 18 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Everything looks good now, so I'll pass the article as a GA. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 16:49, 19 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]