Talk:Final Five (gymnastics)/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 22:11, 29 May 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 07:52, 19 June 2024 (UTC)

I will be reviewing this, comments will probably be finished in the next 72 hours! Arconning (talk) 07:52, 19 June 2024 (UTC)

@Riley1012 Here are my comments! Arconning (talk) 15:13, 20 June 2024 (UTC)

@Arconning: Thank you for the review, I think I have addressed all of your comments! -Riley1012 (talk) 18:18, 20 June 2024 (UTC)

Prose and MoS

• Probably put a disambig on the top of the page, considering there are other types of Final Fives.

•  Done

Lead

• It was the United States', wikilink United States to United States at the Summer Olympics.

•  Done

• second at an Olympics hosted outside the United States. , mention in body too + source or just omit. Suggesting to omit

•  Done

• With nine medals total, the Final Five is the most decorated American Olympic gymnastics team., As of [YEAR],....

•  Done

Team background

• dubbed the Fierce Five, at the 2012 London Olympics, add comma at the end.

•  Done

• With 10 gold medals total, , spell out as ten. MOS:NUMERAL

•  Done

• becoming the first American women, woman as it's referring to Biles.

•  Done

• alongside Douglas and Raisman, 2016 U.S. Classic, add comma at the end.

•  Done

• Then at the National Championships, Then, at the National Championships.

•  Done

• fourth-straight, remove hyphen.

•  Done

Olympic Trials

• for the Olympic team with, add comma after team.

•  Done

Captain and nickname

• age 22, suggest saying it as 22 years old.

•  Done

• The team members chose the name Final Five before the Olympic Games,, I'm guessing the italicization is for emphasis? Use the templates provided in Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Text formatting#Emphasis, rather than apostrophes.

•  Done switched to quotation marks, although those can be removed if needed.

• made up of four athletes, add comma at the end.

•  Done

2016 Summer Olympics

• Instances of on uneven bars and on the uneven bars and other apparatus, would suggest to stick with the latter to maintain consistency.

•  Done All instances should be fixed now

• over points ahead of Raisman, list how many points.

•  Done

• who won the silver medal, add comma at the end.

•  Done

• bronze-medalist Aliya Mustafina, Mustafina of...[Nation]..

•  Done

• World all-around champion , uncapitalize world.

•  Done

• and Ecaterina Szabo (1984), add comma at the end.

•  Done

• Overall, the Final Five won nine Olympic medals, making them the most decorated American gymnastics team in history, As of....

•  Done

Post-Olympics

• Hernandez returned to completion in 2021, guessing it should be competition.

•  Done

• postponed-2020 Olympic Games, remove hyphen.

•  Done

• plus one of the three alternates, who?

• Locklear, information added.  Done

Gallery

• I suggest removing, since they're featured in the first image shown. But per Wikipedia:Image use policy#Image galleries, a bit iffy. Though I heavily suggest removing it since they would be mentioned in the first image.

•  Done

Images

• Images have proper licenses.
• List down members of the "Final Five" in the image caption seen in the lead. Clarify the members from left-to-right, per the tag.

•  Done

• The Final Five celebrating after winning the Women's Team All-Around at the 2016 Summer Olympics, caption on second image. Uncapitalize Women's Team All-Around.

Refs

• Earwig pass.
• Manual pass.

Spotchecks

• Ref 36, seems good.
• Ref 49, seems good.
• Honestly, all of the sources seem pretty nice, standard sources someone would use in a sports article, pass. :)

Misc

• No ongoing edit war, pretty broad information on the topic, neutral.

Good Article review progress box

Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed