Talk:Filmed Before a Live Studio Audience/GA1

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia:Short description: All mainspace articles should have a short description.
Non-free use rationale for the poster looks good.
Plot section is less than 400 words so it passes MOS:TVPLOT.
Are the commas after "with his speed", "Vision for dinner", and "as a test" necessary?
"Maximoff tells Vision to remove the food from Mr. Hart's throat" – elaborate
Add hyphens between "21st century", "most watched", "most streamed", and "most viewed".
"only eight script revisions ." → "only eight script revisions."
"Dennis the mailman" sounds better than "the mailman Dennis" in #Casting.
Does "clean-up" usually have a hyphen between it?
"aspect ration" – typo?
"Nielsen Media Research, who measure" → "Nielsen Media Research, which measures" (company)
"had 9.3 percent share" → "had a 9.3 percent share"
Avengers: Age of Ultron is linked twice.
Citation #6 from The Hollywood Reporter is marked as dead but the link works.
Citation #51 is missing an author credit ("Seymour, Mike").
Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 01:59, 2 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: I think myself and Facu-el Millo have addressed these. As stated on your episode 2 review, the short description is handled automatically by the infobox. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 03:11, 2 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  - Thank you Facu-el Millo and Favre1fan93! - adamstom97 (talk) 04:20, 2 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

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