Talk:Filipino nationalism/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: What a pro. (talk · contribs) 15:04, 14 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The lead is too small for an article of this size.
I don't see how sections 7, 8, and 11 relate to Filipino Nationalism.
There are several citation needed tags and a clarification needed tag.
Some sections have whole paragraphs that are uncited.
Dashes and capitalization aren't used properly (e.g. The Start of Filipino Nationalism (1760s-1820s)).
There is a reference an entire book (citation 1) without giving the pages.
There are two references that are exactly the same (11 & 12).
There are some bare URLs.
Reference 30 leads to nowhere.
Many references lack details like publisher, accessdate, etc.
Some grammar errors (e.g. Ramon Magsaysay, which was then...).
A little POV (e.g. Corazon Aquino succeeded as president of the Philippines.).
Prose needs work (e.g. The Katipunan reached an overwhelming membership and attracted almost the lowly of the Filipino class.)

Sorry, but this article needs a lot of work before it becomes a GA. Good luck on improving the article, though. What a pro (talk, contribs) thinks that ohhhh, ohhh, woaaah-oh-oh-ohhhhh. 15:04, 14 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]