Talk:Fieldin Culbreth/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Go Phightins! (talk · contribs) 21:19, 22 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I have made a handful of edits to this page, so barring any objection, I will review it anyway. I will review and then ask for a second opinion to ensure neutrality. Go Phightins! 21:19, 22 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

A few miscellaneous notes:

In the umpiring career section, give something quantitative about "did not take long" to get to the big leagues...one month or one year, or one decade? Done
How is the Mariners game score relevant? Done I removed it.
Cite his 2013 crew. Done
Isn't "umpired" usually the verb we associate with umps rather than "officiated"? Perhaps, but using "umpired" over and over again might be a little redundant. I think "officiated" is fine.
There's a problem with the balance in this article. Most of the "notable games" and "incidents" are from the last five or six years, and hardly any are from pre-2005, yet he has been an umpire since 1993. We need some due weight to each part of his career. Done, maybe. Take a look and see what you think.
References look generally OK. I will spot check when all other issues are addressed. Thanks. Go Phightins! 01:12, 24 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- All right; all of the refs seem to check out. Passing. Go Phightins! 19:15, 7 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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