Talk:Festivali i Këngës 59/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 14:24, 10 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will start reviewing this today after you have made all of the suggested changes to the other article I reviewed; feel free to tell me if the number of reviews is too much at once and you will not be able to respond to this one by tomorrow. --K. Peake 14:24, 10 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Kyle Peake Thank you for your fast reviews, that's of course fine for me.--Lorik17 (talk) 14:45, 10 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

Target Radio Televizioni Shqiptar to RTSH
"on 21 and 22 December, and" → "on 21 and 22 December, respectively, and"
"the competition did not used" → "the competition did not use"
"as traditionally at the" → "in the traditional location of the"
"in an open-air location at the Sheshi Italia." maybe reword this slightly while keeping the same meaning, as it is a bit too repetitive of earlier in this para?
"of the contest will therefore" → "of the contest and will therefore"
"in the Eurovision Song Contest 2021 Rotterdam," → "for the Eurovision Song Contest 2021 in Rotterdam,"

Background and format

"was organised by RTSH" → "was organised by Radio Televizioni Shqiptar (RTSH)" with the target
"on 21 and 22 December, and" → "on 21 and 22 December, respectively, and"
"The three shows were" → "The three live shows were"
"and Albanian host Blendi Salaj." → "and host Blendi Salaj." since "Albanian" being the nationality used earlier in the sentence makes it obvious he is too

Impact of the COVID-19 pandemic

"was not held as traditionally at" → "was not held per tradition at"
Target open-air to Open-air concert

Contestants

"in the competition between" → "in Festivali i Këngës between"
"of twenty-six artists and songs" → "of 26 artists and songs" per MOS:NUM
"On 16 November," → "On 16 November 2020,"
Artist(s) → Artist, as none of the instances feature more than one
Composer(s) → Composer, per above

Semi-finals

Semi-final 1

"the official studio version of their entries." → "the official studio versions of their respective entries." or something similar since otherwise it sounds like they performed a studio version of all their entries together
"the selected eighteen songs to" → "the selected 18 songs to"
Artist(s) → Artist, per earlier comment

Semi-final 2

"acoustic version of their entries." → "acoustic versions of their respective entries." with the target, per earlier comment
Add the appropriate source(s) to the table
Artist(s) → Artist, per earlier comment

Final

"Before the end of the show," → "Before the end of the competition,"
"as the winner of the competition" → "as the winner" since these two suggestions being implemented helps make things less wordy
Remove wikilink on Eurovision Song Contest 2021
Add the appropriate source(s) to the table
Artist(s) → Artist, per earlier comment

Broadcasters

Target live streams to Live streaming
"through their official YouTube channel" → "of Festivali i Këngës through their official YouTube channel"
See MOS:TABLECAPTION
Broadcaster(s) → Broadcaster, per earlier comment
Centre the refs

Notes

Good

References

Copyvio score looks good at 21.9%; ignore the URLs that have been flagged as too high because none of them are used as sources anywhere in this article
Ref 23 is the only one that still needs archiving
WP:OVERLINK of Wiwibloggs on ref 12

Final comments and verdict

On hold until you have fixed everything; the article was on the verge of edit warring but that got resolved weeks ago. --K. Peake 17:06, 10 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Kyle Peake: I responded to your comments. The edit warning was related to the final results which in the end were fake.--Lorik17 (talk) 17:43, 10 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Iaof2017: Yeah I recognised that since the resolving summary did mention it as well as solving the issues, which is why I marked the article as stable. ✓ Pass now, but don't change this from future to GA class because the Eurovision Song Contest that this was held for still has yet to happen. --K. Peake 17:56, 10 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Kyle Peake thanks for the reminder and the successful review. Best regards!--Lorik17 (talk) 18:00, 10 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]