Talk:Fender Contempo Organ/GA1
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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 06:34, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
- Permalink to version reviewed.
- You could incorporate some of the product's features in the lead.
- I've added a bit, though at 3,600 characters of prose (a point I raised at WT:GAN), there probably doesn't warrant more than a sentence.
- "$(5,900" → Why's the dollar sign outside the parentheses?
- Formatting error
- Link: octave, tone, vibrato
- Okay with the latter two, but I think "octave" qualifies as "the names of subjects with which most readers will be at least somewhat familiar" as seen in MOS:OVERLINK.
- tremolo and vibrato should be italicized.
- Are you sure about that? Hammond organ (a longstanding GA that has also seen significant editing since) doesn't do this.
- Tremolo is currently linked at second mention.
- Fixed
- "axis tone\volume" → Is the backslash intended?
- No, it's my ham-fisted typing, probably :-)
- "in Miles Davis group" → You're inconsistent with the use of "Miles Davis group" and "the Miles Davis group". Also, if you use the former, it should be " in Miles Davis' group"
- I think per the principles set out in WP:DUH, "the album" gets the point across equally well and side-steps this issue.
- "Live-Evil" → Italicize.
- Done, per MOS:ALBUM
- Images are fine.
- Spot-checks on ref 5 (Combo Organ Heaven) support the claims made, but what makes this a reliable source (seems like a personal blog). AryKun (talk) 06:34, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
- Okay, the image licensing is fine, could use alt text though (not needed at GA level).
- I'll be passing this article as it meets all the criteria and I can't see any other issues. AryKun (talk) 08:22, 14 April 2022 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. I can never remember how to put alts in inboxes; somebody must know. I'd ask RexxS but he's no longer around. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 09:21, 14 April 2022 (UTC)