Talk:Felix Manuel Rojas

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I think you did a good job with the wording of the page. It is very easy to understand and it reads well. I would add more info to some of the play descriptions (i.e., Soy Chris, Mandance). I would also keep the same format for the Play section. Some you start with the title of the play and use a colon and others you start the description and mention what play it is later in the description (i.e., Growing up Gonzales). This would also apply to the films section. Another thing I would do is to try and add more personal life details. You do mention his birthday, wife, and children but I don't see where he grew up or where he got his degrees (if he went to college). Some personal details like that could really add to the page. A portrait style picture of the artist would also be a good addition so people know what he looks like. Overall the information is verifiable, meets the standard of objectivity set forth by wikipedia and speaks well about the person.w