Talk:Feel the Love (Ayumi Hamasaki song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 00:55, 21 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

What is a music card?
- It's a download code card where you can purchase music from (like a CD, but in the form of a card with a code on it.)
"and lyrically focuses" --> "that lyrically focuses"
Was it called "Countdown Live" or "Countdown"?
In the first section, instead of using "Hamasaki" so many times, you could say "the singer"
"the same track list" --> "the same track listing"
"To promote the singles same release date" --> "To promote the singles' same release date"
"beige-coloured dress" --> This article seems to be written in American English, so "coloured" --> "colored"
"criticised" --> "criticized"
I don't think the image for the music video is really necessary; what do you think?
- There are in fact three music videos to the single, so differentiating the three with one screen shot would be pretty helpful; plus, it also has the first appearance of DJ Hello Kitty. Any opinions on this, or do you think it should be removed?
"make-over" --> "makeover"
"and a stylist" --> "while a stylist"
"track list" --> "track listing"
"Music Cards" --> "Music cards"
Use columns for the "Credits" section; check out "Make Me Like You" for an example
For the "Remixes history", use "Worldwide" instead of listing all of the countries and combine the two dates together since they are the same

ON HOLD – Great work; contact me with any question. Regards, Carbrera (talk) 00:15, 29 September 2016 (UTC).[reply]

Done all adjustments above. Small comments on some of them. CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 04:03, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]