Talk:Fashion show lighting
Contradictions and Redundancies
[edit]The introduction states that fashion show lighting is a unique lighting technique, while the Differences From Normal Stage Lighting section states that the difference is one of purpose. The Differences section could probably be removed, or it's main point (Accentuating texture and colour, as opposed to changing mood/settings) could be better used in the introductory paragraph of the article.
Haute-editeur (talk) 08:01, 9 September 2015 (UTC)
I've since made these and other edits. Review History page. Let me know if you disagree with any of my edits. They are mostly edits of grammar and flow rather than of content. I'm not well-versed enough in the topic at hand to make significant changes in the content of the article. Oddly enough, my username is entirely coincidental. I just thought it was clever. Haute-editeur (talk) 08:16, 9 September 2015 (UTC)