Talk:Farm to Market Road 1709/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Dough4872 (talk · contribs) 01:48, 18 March 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

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1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

   • Cut down on the bolding in the lead. Only "Farm to Market Road 1709 (FM 1709)" and "Urban Road 1709 (UR 1709)" should be bolded.
   • Try not to use "FM 1709" in every sentence at the beginning of the route description. Try using other words such as "the road", "the route", or "the highway".
   • Do not use "then" to describe progression of the route in the route description.
   • The sentence "The road continues through Southlake, passing several large, expensive neighborhoods, Bicentennial Park and the small, private Flying Cap Valley Airport, before passing through Southlake Town Square." is wordy and needs to be split.

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

   • Can some more details about the physical surroundings be added to the lead?

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

I will put the article on hold for some fixes to be made. Dough4872 01:48, 18 March 2012 (UTC)

• I believe that many of the problems have been addressed.
  

Awardgive, the editor with the msitaken name. 04:38, 18 March 2012 (UTC)

• • I went through and made some more copyedits. I am now ready to pass the article. Dough4872 04:47, 18 March 2012 (UTC)