Talk:Fabio Miretti/GA1
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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 19:49, 27 July 2022 (UTC)
Issues:
- "With the Italy U19, he side he took part in the" Something wrong here.
- Merge the first two and last two paragraphs of "International career"
- Replace mentions of "Miretti" after the first mention in each paragraph of this section and "Style of play" with "he". (Still a bit choppy.)
- Height in centimetres, not metres
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it well written?
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- Some issues: see above
- B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- Is it verifiable with no original research?
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines:
- C. It contains no original research:
- D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- Is it neutral?
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- Is it stable?
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Image has an OTRS ticket.
- B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Article looks fine. Will pass once issues are addressed.
- Pass or Fail:
Replies
[edit]Hawkeye7 first, thanks for reviewing it quickly. I whish I had thought to request you earlier.
Done- Done
Partly done, always writing "he" would not be marvelous. As English isn't a pro-drop language, I've sometimes left "Miretti".- I was 1000% sure not to use centimetres in height in soccer pages. However, I've asked here. (I don't think feet and inches should be used)
Now I go fixing Federico Gatti. Dr Salvus 20:19, 27 July 2022 (UTC)
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