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First, I think you should clean up the formatting of your article. Following are various suggestions for how you can do this.
· Under "Most commonly sold FMCG", I would consider placing this information into a table. You are able to create tables in your sandbox, so this shouldn't be too difficult to do. It would be interesting to organize each item with their associated percent in revenue if you are able to retrieve this information.
· Under "Driving factors leading to growth rate", you should provide more information for how each of your topics have contributed to the increase in growth rate. If you have enough information, you can break each topic into a distinct sub-header. You can achieve this by providing statistics or other information about each; for example, for the increasing popularity of working women, you should provide context to this statement by quantifying the increase in women in the work force.
· Under "Main distinguishing features of the FMCG industry", separate each subject in your list (i.e. Technology, Marketing Drive and Research, etc.) into distinct sub-headers. You can choose different sub-headers within the sandbox that are pre-formatted by Wikipedia.
Beyond these suggested changes, I think your information is very interesting! For the most part, you do a great job articulating your information. There are a few issues with grammar, but they are all easy fixes.
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 4 September 2019 and 4 December 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Aditya.jalan8.
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 4 September 2019 and 4 December 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Aditya.jalan8.