Talk:FCSB/GA1
GA Review
[edit]I have looked over the article for its GA review. Here are some suggestions for improvement:
- Per WP:LEAD, an article of this size should have a lead that is 3 or 4 full paragraphs summarizing all the main points of the article.
- Please see MOS:BOLD for when it is appropriate to use bolding in an article.
- Please replace as many dead links as possible. Try using archive.org for the archived versions of the websites used.
- It needs to be made clearer where the info for the all time stats are coming from.
- Like references need to be combined in the reference section.
- Per WP:EL, no fansites in the external links.
- The article is in dire need of a copyedit.
There is just too much work left to be done, so I am failing the article for now. Address these concerns and feel free to renominate. Nikki311 19:28, 6 July 2008 (UTC)