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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:10, 28 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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This looks to be a well-researched article! --K. Peake 09:10, 28 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good!
  • Either write DJ after German-Albanian disc jockey or use a different introduction, as elsewise the full stage name is not mentioned
  • "and was produced by the" → "with production from the"
  • "Musically, it is an uptempo Balkan and Mediterranean-influenced Albanian pop love song, with its Albanian-language lyrics reflecting" → "An uptempo Balkan and Mediterranean-influenced Albanian pop love song, its Albanian-language lyrics reflect" with the wikilink per MOS:LINK2SECT
  • Change the first sentence of the second para to something like "Several music critics complimented the composition of "Ex" and the music video."
  • "a colorful music video" → "an accompanying colorful music video"
  • Remove the term official since that is not needed for the lead

Background and release

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  • Retitle to Background and composition, merging with the first para of the below section
  • Pipe Bardhi to Bardhi (rapper)
  • Wikilink Elvana Gjata
  • You should instead write that Elvana Gjata announced her first collaboration with those other artists because only her Insta is in the source
  • "depicts the muppet character" → "depicted the muppet character"

Music and lyrics

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  • Add info about the vocals/lyrics to the audio sample text
  • The first para should be merged with the above section per it being too short for its own one
  • "along with Gimi-O" → "along with DJ Gimi-O" per this not being the disc jockey's real name
  • "It is an" → "Musically, "Ex" is an"
  • "a Middle Eastern beat." → "a Middle Eastern-styled beat."
  • "pain, and rejection," → "pain and rejection,"
  • "In a review of Illyrian Pirates, the author" → "In a review for Illyrian Pirates, an author"
  • Remove the lyrics include part from the end of the last para

Reception

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  • Create this section with the reviews and commercial reception in two separate paras

Music video

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  • Wikilink music video
  • Add the release years of the two previous singles
  • "garnered 10 million YouTube views in two weeks." → "garnered 10 million views in two weeks on the platform." plus the YouTube stats should come after the critics' comments
  • "The latter further confessed that" → "They further confessed that"
  • Write Gazette Metro instead
  • "on the Swiss singles chart" → "on the Swiss Singles Chart" with the pipe
  • "and listed "Ex" at number 20 for" → "on which "Ex" reached number 20 for"

Credits and personnel

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  • Where is the YouTube source here?

Track listing

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  • Remove this section because it is a one-track release and you've written out the length in prose

Charts

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  • For the Billboard chart, cite Switzerland Songs and then Billboard in brackets

Release history

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  • Good

References

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  • Copyvio score looks great at 28.1%!!!
  • Remove the "on Apple Music" parts from the citations of ref 3, adding the countries in brackets after publishers instead
  • Remove "on Spotify" from ref 4
  • Cite YouTube in the via parameter instead on refs 6 and 10
  • What exactly makes ref 11 a reliable source?
I replaced it with a better one from a more established online website. Iaof2017 (talk) 14:00, 28 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Final comments and verdict

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Hello @Kyle Peake: nice to hear from you again. I fixed all the issues above. Iaof2017 (talk) 14:08, 28 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Iaof2017 Nice job there, but you still need to remove the lyrics part from the last para of comp and cite YouTube in the via parameter of refs. --K. Peake 08:09, 29 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry for the delay Kyle Peake, I've already fixed the comment with the YouTube parameter. Iaof2017 (talk) 13:16, 30 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Iaof2017 It appears elsewise actually, as it is currently cited in the publisher parameter. --K. Peake 18:41, 30 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Hey Kyle Peake, I'm not sure what you mean by that cause I've already cited YouTube in the parameter of ref [11] ([6]) and [17] ([10]). :O Iaof2017 (talk) 19:54, 1 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry, I got it now, my bad! ^^ Iaof2017 (talk) 20:04, 1 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
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