Talk:Evidence (Faith No More song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:49, 4 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Per all the other similar reviews, "replaced their previous guitar player Jim Martin and were dealing with the absence of keyboard player Roddy Bottum" explain.
"and R&B influenced" link R&B, and should be and "soul- and R&B-influenced"
"and accompanied" was.
"Although it did not" Although the single/track did not...
"who had been fired from the band" why
"producer Andy Wallace. Wallace had" repetitive.
"friend of Bottom's.[1][4] " typo.
"Stern, and recorded" which was?
"The band made an appearance the previous" had made.
"UK singles chart" link it.
Refs 9 and 11 could use en-dash, proper clear up too, extracting the publisher from the title.

Thanks again for the review! I think this should cover everything but as always let me know if I've missed anything. 𝄠ʀᴀᴘᴘʟᴇ ● 19:20, 4 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]