Talk:Eversince/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Skyshiftertalk 21:51, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Locust member (talk · contribs) 00:51, 14 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Skyshifter (talk · contribs) 00:52, 4 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this soon. Skyshiftertalk 00:52, 4 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for taking this one! Locust member (talk) 01:45, 4 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Image has a valid fair use rationale.
No copyvio.

Lead

It was released by Year0001 on 25 May 2016. → released on 25 May 2016 through Year0001.
- Y
It was produced → The album was produced
- Y
The album received → Eversince received
- Y

Background and composition

They ended up meeting → They later met (as you just used "ended up")
- Y
made a name for himself can be made more formal i.e. "established a reputation for himself"
- Y
When Eversince was released, publications simply described him as a "Yung Lean collaborator". The word "simply" is editorializing. Additionally, I don't think this sentence is particularly important to include unless sources specifically note that "when Eversince was released, publications simply described Bladee as a Yung Lean collaborator".
- Y just removed it altogether, sorry for the unintentional WP:OR on my part, I just noticed pretty much every article on the album said "Yung Lean collaborator Bladee..." lol

Release and reception

by Year0001 on 25 May 2016 → on 25 May 2016 through Year0001
- Y
"briljant debut [brilliant debut]" either paraphrase or add the original quote to a footnote, same for the next one. Also note that there are some quotes from Eklund at the previous section
- Y added a footnote to all translated quotes; somehow missed the ones in the previous section

Release history

I don't think "Various" is correct for the physical releases. It's usually not the case, and it's not what I see here
- Y changed to source

Spotchecks

1 checks out. You could add the "frostbitten futurism" thing and the info on "Rip" from ref. 1 to the composition paragraph
- Y added.
2: It doesn't confirm After releasing his debut mixtape Gluee in 2014. Add in bold: Stockholm's flourishing cloud rap scene
- Y done... source says Gluee is his debut mixtape, but I added another one in to confirm its release year. Also I do not believe I would need to wikilink Stockholm per MOS:OVERLINKING but let me know if I am wrong.
3 checks out
4 checks out

On hold Skyshiftertalk 19:52, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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