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Your article has met all of the criteria. Really a very nice draft! You could improve the following:

  • Grammar and wording in the Research Contributions section. You have the concepts of her work her, but your descriptions are a bit awkward with grammar and terminology usage errors. Look back at the introduction section of some of her papers to get some of the wording correct.
  • You also need to clarify your use of the term mRNA. I believe she studies miRNA (microRNAs), which is different than mRNA (messenger RNA). Make sure to READ the Wikipedia article on microRNA and link out to the article as well. You currently have a link to mRNA (messenger RNA) which is not what she studies. Fix this link, correct the spelling, and link miRNA every time you use it. If she has also studied viral messenger RNA, you should clarify that she studied BOTH messenger and micro RNAs and make it very clear which you are talking about.S L Seston (talk) 19:03, 14 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you

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Thank you for your feedback. I will make the necessary corrections. Have a good day. Tcm2015 (talk) 03:21, 18 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Final Feedback

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I have made some edits to correct grammar and terminology use. More detailed feedback via email S L Seston (talk) 15:50, 20 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]