Talk:Eugene Kaspersky/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 04:07, 2 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

Add information about his photo in the "alt" parameter please

Done CorporateM (Talk) 23:54, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Remove the parameters not being used:

"Image caption"
"Other names"
Keep the death date and place for now

Done CorporateM (Talk) 23:44, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

A better link for the "nationality" parameter would probably be the article for "Russians", yes?

Done CorporateM (Talk) 23:44, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Early life

Nada, great work!

Kaspersky Lab

Origins

Add a comma in between "In 1994" and "Hamburg University in Germany..." please

Done CorporateM (Talk) 23:45, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Move Ref. 21 to after this sentence: "From 1998 to 2000, its annual revenue grew 280 percent and by 2000 almost sixty percent of revenues were international." instead of its current placement after "Kaspersky's company grew quickly in the late 1990s." please

Done CorporateM (Talk) 23:47, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

CEO

I think I would add "of the Kaspersky Lab" after "Kaspersky became CEO"; I don't know, it sounds more clear and exact this way

Done CorporateM (Talk) 23:48, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Controversies

Alleged affiliations with Russia

Remove the red link to "Sofacy" please

Done CorporateM (Talk) 23:49, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Personal life

Paragraph 3

The last two statements sound more like afterthoughts and are awkwardly placed

Are you suggesting a trim or moving it somewhere else? CorporateM (Talk) 23:51, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

To be honest, I don't know what could be done with them. There's no better place for them but there, so it's fine. Carbrera (talk) 16:29, 10 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

References

Ref. 14 - De-capitalize "WIRED"

Done CorporateM (Talk) 23:53, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

End of GA Review:

A very good article, with just a few changes; in fact, probably the least amount of changes I've ever suggested. Good work! On hold for seven days; cheers, Carbrera (talk) 19:22, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Passing. Thanks for your quick responses! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 16:29, 10 June 2016 (UTC).[reply]