Talk:Eu cred/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 22:09, 2 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Grabbing for a review. Aoba47 (talk) 22:09, 2 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Lead and infobox

Please include ALT text for the infobox image.

Done

For this part (and was released as a CD single), I would extend the wikilink to the entire phrase “CD single”.

Done

I have a question about this part (It was recorded at the Studioul muzical al TVR in Bucharest,); is the following (Studioul muzical al TVR) the name of the recording studio? If so, then shouldn’t “muzical” be capitalized as well?

Names of songs, buildings, studios don't have all words capitalized. It's a rule.

That makes sense. I was just thinking of how it was done in English, and did not consider how it may differ in other languages. Aoba47 (talk) 10:52, 3 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I am not certain that “English language” requires a wikilink.

Done Indeed

Background and release

Oddly enough, you do not directly say that Mălina Olinescu performed and recorded the song in the body of the article. You should also include the artist’s full name in the body of the article and wikilink the name.

Done

For this part (A CD of), I would say “CD single” rather than just “CD”.

Done

Again, I do not believe that “English language” needs to be wikilinked.

Done

I am confused by this sentence (Adrian Ștefănescu was further credited for artists and repertoire (A&R) services.). You say “further credited”, which implies to me that he was involved in other parts of the song, though this is the first time you mention him in this section. Could you clarify this?

This was just and odd mistake. I've corrected it.

At Eurovision

Move the “United Kingdom” wikilink up to the first instance in this section.

Done

If you wikilink “United Kingdom” in this section, then it shoud be linked in the lead as well for consistency.

United Kingdom shouldn't be linked in the lead, as it's not linked as a country but as a Eurovision participant. It link to United Kingdom in the Eurovision Song Contest

Oh, thank you. I missed that for some reason. Aoba47 (talk) 10:55, 3 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Release history

I am not sure what you mean by (N/A 1998). I would just say 1998 if the month is not known.

Done Seems legit

I would be consistent with your use of either “Mega Music” or “Mega”throughout the article.

The label shouldn't have any "...Music/...Records" in the infobox or release history section, so that's why I've done it like this.

References

There are only five references in the article, which is rather small. Are there other sources out there for this song?

I've added three more. The song is covered by a lot of other sources, but they always say the same, so it's not really that big of a deal adding all of them.

I understand. Nothing wrong with that. I just wanted to make sure. Aoba47 (talk) 10:56, 3 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Final comments

Overall, the article is in very good shape. My comments are primarily minor, though I do have some concerns about the length (as it is rather short with only five references). Once my comments are addressed, I will pass this as a GA. Hope you are having a great new year so far. Aoba47 (talk) 22:19, 2 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi and thank you so much for the review. I'm waiting for ages for someone to review my Eurovision articles

! I have responded to all your comments and expanded the aricle with one more sentence about her past (that's all I can do). As for the length, I've seen other GAs like this, e.g. my very own "Dincolo de nori". But at the end of the day, it's your decision. Happy New Yeat (!!!) and greetings; Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:19, 3 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Verdict

Great work with the article. I will ✓ Pass this as a GA. Hopefully, your other articles get reviewed in the near future. I will probably grab some of your articles for review in the future lol. Have a great end to your week. Aoba47 (talk) 10:58, 3 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]