Talk:Ester Peony/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 11:16, 27 July 2019 (UTC)

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 11:16, 27 July 2019 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• Delink Canada per MOS:OVERLINK

 Done

• "Peony started to compose music for Romanian artists before gaining recognition for her YouTube covers in 2015." - better; before gaining recognition for posting covers on YouTube in 2015.

 Done

Early life and career

• "There, she showed special interest in music " - how about showed a particular interest or a similarily worded sentence?

 Done

• "under her mononym Ester in the winter of 2014." - try to avoid using seasons in a time frame per MOS:SEASON

 Done

• "which was playlisted by native radio and television stations." - does the text in bold refer to national and/or local radio/television stations?

 Done It refers to national stations; I changed that now.

Artistry and personal life

• "Her stage name features the mentioning of" - mentions

 Done

• "In turn, the singer's first name Ester has an Arabic background could mean "star" in Old Persian " - that could mean

 Done

This is nice and neat article on Peony. Nothing too major to be addressed in this review. MWright96 (talk) 13:02, 27 July 2019 (UTC)

@MWright96: Thank you very much for the review :) I think I've addressed everything. Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:14, 4 August 2019 (UTC)

@Cartoon network freak: Lovely. Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 19:19, 4 August 2019 (UTC)