Talk:Esham/GA1

GA Review

Okay, I'll take this one.

The page just has one section, "History". Can this be broken up, or can more material be added?
The infobox had some formatting issues which I fixed (e.g., "instrument" was empty.) Fixed.
Is there any info on his musical stylings? I don't see much of anything about that.
- Yes, the following sentence: "His music fused hip hop music with the lyrical content of death metal. Smith labeled this style "acid rap," comparing the lyrics to hallucinations induced by LSD." (Ibaranoff24 (talk) 18:23, 17 August 2008 (UTC))[reply]
The discography page, while not a part of the article per se, should be formatted in table form for prime legibility. See Carrie Underwood discography, which is a featured list, for an example of a proper discography.
No image or date of birth? These aren't essential, but it would be nice to have them.
Sourcing looks decent. Like I said, it could use more fleshing out, and that would probably require more sources to be added.

I'll give this a week for improvement. Ten Pound Hammer and his otters • ^{(Broken clamshells • Otter chirps • HELP)} 17:14, 17 August 2008 (UTC) Some more points:[reply]

A section on critical reception is needed. Cite some third-party reviews and what they thought of his albums.
Quote from QST: "In the next section ("Natas and KKKill the Fetus"), it mentions his school he attended. That should be mentioned in the Early life too."
"In October, Esham appeared on..." Which October?
Another quote from QST: "Citation 14 needs to state the URL of the publishing website rather than "southcoast247", which it currently has."