Talk:Escúchame (Carlos Ponce song)/GA1

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:52, 12 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Remove the word studios after Crescent Moon in the infobox and where is this sourced?
Add a comma after second studio album
Make the release sentence the second of the lead instead
"It is a flamenco pop ballad in which Ponce makes a" → "A flamenco pop ballad, it features Ponce making a"
Wikilink lead single
"on August 16, 1999 by" → "on August 16, 1999, by"
"It was met with positive reactions from music critics who praised the song's" → "The song received positive reactions from music critics, who praised its"
"of the track was released in Brazil and features Brazilian singer" → "of it was released in Brazil and features" since the introduction is not needed for the lead

"album, Todo lo Que Soy, which was released in September 21, 1999." → "album Todo lo Que Soy, which was issued on September 21."
"for the project such as" → "for the project, such as"
"two of the album's track including" → "two of the album's tracks, including"
[9] should solely be at the end of the sentence per WP:OVERCITE

"as released as the album's lead single" → "was released as the album's lead single" with the wikilink
"in Miami, Florida September 28." → "in Miami, Florida, on September 28."
"was filmed in at" → "was filmed at"
"dancing in an club" → "dancing in a club"
Directly mention that the single was released only in Brazil
"number one in Brazil according" → "number one in Brazil, according"
"found it to be" → "found "Escúchame" to be"
Chicago Sun Times → Chicago Sun-Times with the wikilink
"vocals as it works" → "vocals, as it works"
"and hand claps."" → "and hand claps"." per MOS:QUOTE
"making it his third" → "making it Ponce's third"

Copyvio score looks amazing at 1.0%!!!
Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine) on ref 3
WP:OVERLINK of AllMusic on ref 8 and remove it from the title
Wikilink Houston Chronicle on ref 9
Sun Sentinel → Sun-Sentinel on ref 12 with the wikilink
Why does ref 16 include Sun Herald when this isn't actually mentioned in prose when you cite this review?

On hold until all of the issues are fixed; nice job on this one again! --K. Peake 08:28, 12 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Kyle Peake I'll likely do it this weekend due to work. Erick (talk) 23:13, 12 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Magiciandude That is within under a week as articles stay on hold for, so should be fine! --K. Peake 08:06, 13 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Kyle Peake Thanks for your patience and the review. In regards to the Sun Herald, that's the newspaper being cited, but the article came from the Houston Chronicle if that makes sense. See the GA review for Llegar a Ti (song) for reference. Otherwise, I think I got everything in one go. Erick (talk) 15:23, 17 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
✓ Pass now, I did some brief copy editing where you got confused but nice response just under a week later! --K. Peake 07:04, 18 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]