Talk:Ernie Curtis/GA1
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:06, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- Any chance of a fair use image of Ernie here?
- I'm not really aware of any. Kosack (talk) 15:23, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
- Professionalism in association football has a natty article for these kind of "turn of the time" amateur/pro bios.
- "In the club'..." become/became and Final/final in one sentence...
- 'he 2nd Welsh Brigade, Royal Field Artillery but' probably a comma after Artillery here.
- I would link "publican" for those many millions of readers who don't have "pubs".
- Poor souls. Kosack (talk) 15:23, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
- " On his signing, he ... signing..." repetitive.
- "injury sustained in March 1927. The injury" quick repeat and do we know what kind of injury?
- "absence in the league, was also absent " similar repetitive comment.
- "become the only team" is this "first (and as of 2021, only) team.."?
- "final.[5][2]" order.
- "over amateur side Corinthians" just curious how these opponents were selected for the Charity Shield, traditionally the winners of the league, right?
- There's a link for "transfer" somewhere in Wikipedia.
- "They lost, and Curtis twisted his knee during the match and missed" one too many "and"s in this sentence, merge one...
- link inside-forward.
- And outside-left if possible.
- Apparently "brace" is not well known outside the UK, so that either needs re-phrasing or linking.
- Link pub in the body too.
- Shouldn't it be 1927–28 British Home Championship? It took place in both years.
- Penalty area and penalty should be linked first time.
- Curtis would teach -> taught
- Link Home Championships every time and again, shouldn't it be the two-year range?
- Racecourse Ground should also be linked each time (sortable table).
That's all I have, a nice article, so it's on hold for the moment. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 20:25, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: Thanks for taking a look. Everything addressed apart from the image, I'm not really too sure of any fair use ones. Let me know what you think. Kosack (talk) 15:23, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
- Happy with that so promoting to GA. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:38, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: Thanks for taking a look. Everything addressed apart from the image, I'm not really too sure of any fair use ones. Let me know what you think. Kosack (talk) 15:23, 6 March 2021 (UTC)