Talk:Episode 5 (Twin Peaks)/GA1

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 03:23, 8 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox: Production code?
Didn't add one; to be honest I'm seeing less use for them as I go on. If you think it's important I could dig it up. GRAPPLE X 05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Lede: You need to mention the episode's broadcast and ratings per WP:LEDE
Already there—"First airing on May 10, 1990, "Episode 5" was viewed by approximately 18 percent of the available audience during its broadcast; it has received positive reviews from critics." GRAPPLE X 05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Lede: Federal Bureau of Investigation should be simply "FBI"
Sure? Done. GRAPPLE X 05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Plot: Merge shorter paragraphs where possible
Done. GRAPPLE X 05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Production: Unlink Twin Peaks there per WP:REPEATLINK
Not done, that's the only instance of the link in the article body. GRAPPLE X 05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Reception: "ABC Network" write out fully then have (ABC) upon first mention
Written as "American Broadcast Company" now. GRAPPLE X 05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Reception: A− needs quotation marks around
Got it. GRAPPLE X 05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
References: Why do some references have publishers, and some don't. Choose one method please.
Added. GRAPPLE X 05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Think I've addressed everything now. GRAPPLE X 05:26, 1 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]