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From Biosthmors
Thanks for your work on this
Don't cite things in WP:HEADINGS
I'd spell out millimeter in the WP:LEAD to make it more accessible
See WP:REFSPACE examples for where exactly to place the reference
That's it for now I hope to have more comments later
If you found my comments helpful, I suggest you help someone else do something sometime. =) Biosthmors (talk ) 22:04, 26 November 2012 (UTC) [ reply ]
From Scray
Subsequent edits did not reflect this suggestion, so I've introduced a few changes to give a sense of what I've suggested. Happy to discuss here. -- Scray (talk ) 17:58, 27 November 2012 (UTC) [ reply ]
Thanks for the help, The edits I made were based of of the way the procedure overview was written in this entry. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Surgery Jgore3 —Preceding undated comment added 18:07, 27 November 2012 (UTC) [ reply ]